User talk:LightSkin.Cis.Girl/sandbox

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Revisions necessary. Also, when you reference books, be sure to provide page numbers. Chronophoto (talk) 19:50, 25 February 2018 (UTC) (course instructor)
 * Labaki’s Wikipedia page is already pretty extensive and some of the information in your sandbox already exists on this page. Make sure you can come up with 500 words of new prose to add to the page.

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This is a very basic article about Nadine Labaki. There is good content about her work and achievements, though there is very little content about how she became to be a director/filmmaker. The article is also very well-structured. There is not much written about this filmmaker, and most of the information is general. For example, when you mention that she's contributed to Nancy Ajram's music video, you don't mention what role she had. You only provide background information about the music video, but few about her role in the video. Did she produce it, direct it? Also, you can provide a little more content about her involvement in politics. You do mention her involvement with the political movement, but you can add more about the social/political issues she was involved with, as well as her roles in the political field. As I said earlier, there isn't much about this filmmaker. If you can research more information about her, it would heavily improve this article! WikiMaster008 (talk) 05:09, 26 February 2018 (UTC)