User talk:Lilaclydia/April Soetarman

Peer Review
1. I really liked the lead to the article. I thought it was very clear and covered a lot of good summary information about April, and painted a clear picture of her and the type of work she does in a few sentences.

2. One thing I would change is to add some additional formatting to the "Career Projects" section (i.e. making the signs a bulleted list). I think this would break up that second section visually and make it easier to read. It would also be neat if it was possible to add an example image on the side.

3. I think the most impactful change would be to modify that second section by separating the different projects into their own paragraph, and expanding on the examples if possible.

4. I really liked the idea of adding examples of career projects into the article. I think it would really help me add some additional content to my own article.