User talk:LillianPittman/sandbox

Hi Lilli, Great addition. I like that you were able to add a whole new section.

Few critiques 1. Add a comma between 'the first of' and 'which' in the second sentence 2. The title of the first piece of literature is confusing (I am not sure if it just a really long title) 3. Wrap up the end of the section with a small conclusion, something along the lines of: "Despite her crimes, Gottfried will go down in history as not only committing fatal crimes, but influencing creative pieces of literature" 4. Add a period at the end of the last sentence

I really liked this section Lilli, and this might be the first time I've read women murders. Thanks for providing this cool information. Good luck on your final draft! NikeaBanks (talk) 19:57, 23 April 2020 (UTC)NikeaBanks

I love your addition to this wikipedia article! You have definitely chosen an interesting person to do your research on. Your sentence structure and points that you have added has kept me engaged throughout the paragraph. Kanderson13 (talk) 04:53, 29 April 2020 (UTC)kanderson13