User talk:Lilly861/sandbox

Hello Lilly, great start! I'm not seeing a lot of content in your sandbox yet. Are these bullet points sub-sections you'll be adding to Orrorin? I noticed you used "likely" a lot, maybe reduce the use of that word.73.231.254.75 (talk) 19:35, 14 May 2020 (UTC)

Hello Lily, It sounds like your information is all relevant to your topic, I suggest you break the information down into two paragraphs, this will make your article sound balanced and it will give it clarity. Also adding some visual aids would benefit your article. I think your are off to a great start. I also checked your sources and they all checked out. Good job!--2605:E000:1219:C6BE:9C1A:5749:BCD6:1E98 (talk) 13:35, 13 May 2020 (UTC)