User talk:LillySnow321/sandbox

I MADE SEVERAL EDITS FOR FLOW BUT YOU NEED TO READ MY COMMENTS INSIDE YOUR TEXT TO CORRECT AND TAKE ACTIONS ON OTHER AREAS. THIS WILL BE THE THIRD ENTRY UNDER SELECTED WORKS. MAKE YOUR EDITS TO CLEAN THIS UP AND REMOVE MY NOTATIONS ONCE YOU ACT ON THEM. I WILL REVIEW AGAIN BEFORE WE SEE EACH IN CLASS.