User talk:Lily.luna.22

Welcome!
Hi Lily.luna.22, welcome to Wikipedia! I wanted to drop you a note because I just removed your recent addition to The Women's Building (San Francisco) - I appreciate your effort, but this new addition was written more like an essay instead of in Wikipedia's "neutral point of view" style. Would you be up for re-drafting it? In general, every sentence should be based in a reference/source and report something verifiable (not an opinion).

For example, this conveys an opinion and doesn't have a source:


 * "It also represents a powerful physical embodiment of value in the treatment and second-wave feminism, and to secure social justice and gender equality for women and other minorities."

But this is closer to the goal - it makes an effort to describe a fact about the history of the building, with a source:


 * "The Women's Center also provided a lot of women to have their collaborative projects associated with “women's issues, LGBTQ + concerns, and racial empowerment raged across multiple social themes”.

Please let me know if you have questions - I'm happy to try to help. You can write a question on this page, on Talk:The Women's Building (San Francisco), or on my talk page. Dreamyshade (talk) 18:34, 23 April 2021 (UTC)