User talk:Lily538/House of Hummingbird

1. In the sandbox draft, she does a good job of organizing the information, especially within the plot. While it's currently just a bullet-pointed list of the rundown of the plot, it seems to cover the most essential points of the film and is easy to follow. I also think the critic review section she added is a great addition as it provides more information on how people perceived the movie and if it was well liked.

2. Something that could be added on to is the box office section. If possible, I think it would be helpful to add if it had any success in other surrounding countries or the US, adding how many theaters it played in and how much money it made from showing in other various countries.

3. Though she has a very different topic from me (a film vs a Kpop group), I could possibly try to incorporate a critic review section in my article. But rather, find reviews or articles written by people from countries outside of Korea to see how people from other places are perceiving EVERGLOW and how much success they've had.