User talk:Lily538/House of Hummingbird/Joestoff Peer Review

1. I thought Lily did a really good job at looking into different aspects of the topic. For example, spelling out the plot, finding information about the box office sales, as well as detailing critic reviews. She has a handful of sources to work with, so i think she did a good job at that as well. 2. If i could suggest a change or something that might make this article more improved, is that she could include a brief summary of the movie. I know that it is spelled out in the plot information, but sometimes people are looking for quick and easy information to find, which could be accomplished by providing a brief summary of what happens in the movie. 3. Things i liked about lilys that i could include in the improvement to my article is that i need to add more sources to mine, and also look to include different aspects of the topic instead of focusing broadly on one thing.