User talk:Lily huval/sandbox

Copyedit an Article
I appreciate the care you put into copyediting the article. Not all of your changes were for the better, but overall the article is much improved. Keep in mind that WP doesn't have a single editorial standard, so for example, both versions of "labor" and "labour" are permitted. It's just a difference between American and British spelling. What matters is that each individual article is internally consistent. You should follow the editorial standards set by previous editors unless they're obviously incorrect. Josef Horáček (talk) 20:57, 21 February 2018 (UTC)

Adding Sources
In your sandbox, I see excerpts from the WP article you're hoping to improve and citations for sources. However, I don't see excerpts from the sources that support what is written in the article. Please add the information so that I can verify that your sources are relevant to the article. Do it within a week. Josef Horáček (talk) 21:08, 3 March 2018 (UTC)


 * The sources look good and relevant. Add them to the article. Josef Horáček (talk) 21:53, 22 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Nice job adding multiple footnotes to a single source. You're done with this assignment! Josef Horáček (talk) 18:18, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

Adding a Lead to "Deaf Organizations During the Holocaust"
I recommend that you find another article to work on. This one is really short and contains no general information on the subject that would be appropriate for a lead. Josef Horáček (talk) 20:37, 1 April 2018 (UTC)


 * "Music history of the United States during the colonial era" is a great article to work on. Please post a draft of your lead as soon as you can. Josef Horáček (talk) 23:58, 22 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Go ahead and add the lead to the article. Don't forget to add some internal links. Also, you should change the phrase containing the word "uprising." Uprising means rebellion. I think you meant to say something like "rise." (Uprising only comes later with rock'n'roll, haha!) Josef Horáček (talk) 18:22, 1 May 2018 (UTC)


 * I saw you added the lead. You're done! Josef Horáček (talk) 17:41, 5 May 2018 (UTC)