User talk:Lilyfels/Silanization

Hi Lilly, below is my peer review:

Summary: Add to existing sections: Properties and Mechanism of the Silanization Page as well as adding sources

Major Points:

The points made in the properties section all make sense, but as you mentioned they need to be put together into complete sentences. Also, the citations need to be added to the correct places within the paragraph. It could also be helpful if some of the words you used were linked to their individual Wikipedia page like hydrophobic, hydrophilicity, hydrophobicity, self cleaning, photocatalytic since they are not described here.

The mechanism section is described well, but it could be helpful for readers to have an image.

Minor Points:

For style make sure when converting the points into sentences that they are combined and not choppy.

I had never heard of silanization before reading this Wikipedia page and your proposed edits, but I have learned a lot! Great job!

MEH88 (talk) 01:23, 26 March 2021 (UTC)Morgan