User talk:Lin.florence15/sandbox

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Review #1: This is a good draft. Your box on the right looks good with the picture and the structure. Also, good job on the details with the characteristics. However you are missing some parts, as I'm sure you know, such as history, uses and reactions. I know it's hard to find information on rare compounds but it would be good if you can fill those in as much as you can. I would add more definitely to each section if I were you and come up with some examples if you can of how this compound can apply in different reactions and how it arose. Overall, it's fine right now and Im sure will be great when you are done! Mamidi1 (talk) 02:04, 2 November 2012 (UTC)

Review #2: I really like you chem box and you have a good foundation for your page. Just be sure to fill out the rest of the sections. I think it would also be best to expand on the sections you have started working on. Otherwise good job and you have a good foundation for completing the page. Arslan2 (talk) 03:01, 2 November 2012 (UTC)

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Please do not upload this or your other articles until your teacher or you have communicated with the Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Chemicals. Although not your fault, the work coming from the class is generally substandard.--Smokefoot (talk) 19:35, 24 November 2012 (UTC)