User talk:Linah Nanziri

March 2018
Hello, and thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. This is just a note to let you know that I've moved the draft that you were working on to Draft:Linah Nanziri, from its old location at User:Linah Nanziri. This has been done because the Draft namespace is the preferred location for Articles for Creation submissions. Please feel free to continue to work on it there. If you have any questions about this, you are welcome to ask me on my talk page. Thank you. I dream of horses If you reply here, please ping me by adding to your message (talk to me) (My edits) @  22:15, 27 March 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Linah Nanziri (March 28)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Heliosxeros was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Linah Nanziri and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Linah Nanziri, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "db-self" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
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EROS message 12:39, 28 March 2018 (UTC)

Your submission
Greetings. There are some problems with your submission mainly in its tone. Do read: WP:NPOV and WP:PUFFERY. Some of the words you used are promotional in tone. Eg. "Pearl of Africa Environment (PAE) is a Non-Governmental Organization (NGO) affiliated with environmental Conservation, natural resources, environmental policies, climate change, tourism, agriculture, gender inequality and education predominantly in Uganda since 2010." Plus, the section on structure reads like a catalogue and should be removed. EROS message 07:53, 29 March 2018 (UTC)

Your PAE submission
Sorry for taking such a long time to reply. I was away from keyboard. I've read the improved version. I still feel that you could add in more information abotu the organisation. Perhaps the current affairs of the org. EROS message 07:43, 5 April 2018 (UTC)

Submission
Greetings. You claim to have left a message for me. I don't see it on your either talkpages. In any way, the summary campaigns are vaguely promotional to me as it reads like a listing on a brochure. In any case, if any questions persist, you may post it to the Helpdesk. In the mean time, feel free to contribute on topics of your interest while waiting for other reviewers to review your submission. Cheers and happy editing. EROS message 09:29, 10 April 2018 (UTC)

Paid editing
In wikipedia, if you are paid to edit or writing on the behalf of someone or an organisation, you would have to declare. EROS message 12:34, 10 April 2018 (UTC)

About publishing
Greetings. Since I have previously reviewed your submission, it would be best if another reviewer reviews your article for a much more impartial judgement. Hence, your submission will be in the submission list waiting to be reviewed. Your patience is much appreciated. CHeers. EROS message 13:19, 10 April 2018 (UTC)

Managing a conflict of interest
Hello, Linah Nanziri. We welcome your contributions, but if you have an external relationship with the people, places or things you have written about in the article Draft:Pearl of Africa Environment (PAE), you may have a conflict of interest (COI). Editors with a COI may be unduly influenced by their connection to the topic. See the conflict of interest guideline and FAQ for organizations for more information. We ask that you:


 * avoid editing or creating articles about yourself, your family, friends, company, organization or competitors;
 * propose changes on the talk pages of affected articles (see the request edit template);
 * disclose your COI when discussing affected articles (see WP:DISCLOSE);
 * avoid linking to your organization's website in other articles (see WP:SPAM);
 * do your best to comply with Wikipedia's content policies.

In addition, you must disclose your employer, client, and affiliation with respect to any contribution for which you receive, or expect to receive, compensation (see WP:PAID).

Also please note that editing for the purpose of advertising, publicising, or promoting anyone or anything is not permitted. Thank you. Kudpung กุดผึ้ง (talk) 13:50, 11 April 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Pearl of Africa Environment (PAE) (May 23)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Waggie were:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Pearl of Africa Environment (PAE) and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Pearl of Africa Environment (PAE), click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "db-self" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
 * If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Pearl_of_Africa_Environment_(PAE) Articles for creation help desk] or on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Waggie&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Pearl_of_Africa_Environment_(PAE) reviewer's talk page].
 * You can also use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Waggie (talk) 22:52, 23 May 2018 (UTC)