User talk:Lindove/sandbox

Peer Review
You did a good job finding pertinent information about Lucy Boole that has not been talked about yet. I like that you are including more about her professional development because that is vital in emphasizing the impact she had on the STEM field. So far, you did really well writing your lead paragraph - it sounds very professional and is clear and to the point. Once you continue writing your paper with the remaining information that you have found, it will make the current Wikipedia article about Boole much stronger. Also, if you can find more information about the paper that she published, it would strengthen the information you have. Potassiumfluoride (talk) 04:36, 11 February 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review 2
I really like the new information you have found on Lucy Boole and think you have a strong start. I like the emphasis on her accomplishments as a woman and her journey to this field. I would maybe write out the FRIC abbreviation in the beginning and then put the abbreviation after in parentheses. I think your writing is professional and to the point as stated above. Also, I do not know if you have any research on her personal life, but I think that would be interesting to add as well. Cmiller02 (talk) 04:49, 11 February 2018 (UTC)