User talk:Lindsaylongg/sandbox/articledraft

Peer Review
I like how you summarized it a little in the article draft part, but if you move the last 3 sentences under article draft & use them as an introduction to the ingredient part it would make more sense. Since you are talking about the ingredients in the last 3 sentences it would flow more under the actual ingredient part. Overall, I think you added a lot of useful information to make this a better article! Nothing in the article seems biased and you carry the same tone throughout the article. The only other thing is that I think if you moved the 'recommended dosage' box up near the ingredients/supplement section it might make it look better. They are both referring to the same product's, so it might make more sense also. With those minor errors fixed and your draft put into the draft you will make the article more improved and better overall than it was before!!

Baelynnmcg (talk) 15:59, 21 March 2019 (UTC)