User talk:Lindsaymcgowan/sandbox

Joe Kang's Peer Review
I am hoping I am on the right sandbox for this topic. If not, you can go ahead and delete it. I am just going from what I am seeing on the page about your group's topic on "drawl". From what I am seeing so so far, there are a good amount of basic amounts of information about the topic. I think it would help if you can add more to the history of the phenomenon of the drawl. An etymology as well. You can add more description and examples to each of the drawls in Southern American English, Broad Australian English, and Broad New Zealand English. Overall, the article has room for more information and improvements. Uaa jdkang (talk) 10:45, 7 November 2018 (UTC)