User talk:Lindseeclark/sandbox

Peer Review Livkelly18
Your article draft is very well written and I really enjoyed learning more about displey behaviour! I few things that I feel would strengthen your article would be:

1. Changing the citation format so that when you do cite a source there is a link to it 2. Adding sections within your article with a heading, perhaps dividing the display behaviour into vertebrates and invertebrates 3. When you refer to a certain animal, such as Ephestiasula arnoena, you could put a wikipedia link to that particular animal so people can read more information about it and actually know what the animal you are referring to looks like 4. Adding pictures or links to videos of display behaviour I feel would strengthen your descriptions of them -For instance you could include a link to a video of the Manakin birds

Overall I very much enjoyed your article! You held a neutral tone throughout and your ideas are fairly well organized!

Good job!