User talk:Lindseygorry/sandbox

Lindsey,

This looks like a good start to your article on raciolinguistics. I think you could flesh out some of the sections a bit more, but, primarily, I just think you include a few more (different) sources to help back up what you're discussing and provide a few other perspectives. Nicely done so far.

Adovevie (talk) 20:30, 13 March 2017 (UTC)

Ho Lindsey, sorry for the delay, but I read your article draft and from the way it looks at the moment, I think you could possibly make a fair amount of the article more clear in terms of how each section transitions to the next one. If possible, you might also include a section that explains the origins of raciolinguistics, but it does not necessarily have to be too detailed due to the development of the topic itself. Along with that, a few more sources different from the ones you currently have can also be included.

Ismaelg1305 (talk) 06:23, 14 March 2017 (UTC)