User talk:Lindyhopfifer/sandbox

Hello Lindyhopfifer,

Peer Review for class:

This article defines what key pricing as a pricing method, describing its uses mainly in retail stores, both physical or online. Obviously, this article is still a draft and there is more to come. Yet still, this is a good beginning, the sections are clearly defined and clear; however, so far the introductory sentences pretty much sum up the article in itself.

I would recommend expanding all sections of course, as well as adding several references that are not yet incorporated to the article. This article seems to be on its (pretty good) way but everything on Wikipedia has to be verifiable and no reference on such article would probably not make it in compliance with Wikipedia's policy.

Furthermore, I would recommend adding a few hyperlinks to redirect the reader toward important notions that are crucial to fully fathom what key pricing is (retail stores; operating costs or distribution for instance). Also, I would recommend adding a "See also" section to relate this topic to other articles that cross-over the same notions to redirect readers who would wish to learn more about topics related to key pricing.

Shaggy Malka (talk) 03:21, 9 November 2014 (UTC)

Peer Review
I think that this is a good start to the article. The introduction is well written and clearly defines Keystone Pricing. I would agree that the sections are clearly defined as well and make sense in the context. I think that the Marketing box is beneficial to have on the side of the page. I do wonder what "overview" is referring to - would that section include the history of keystone pricing and how it came about to be the norm in retail stores?

I think that branching in/out more throughout the article can be beneficial to the readers - linking more key terms. I also would recommend expanding all sections as well - there might not be a need to expand on the introduction however. And of course once more is written I would recommend following wikipedias citation template to make sure that everything is referenced properly throughout the article.

-A. Denis