User talk:Lineker85/sandbox/Rozalén

I have tried to remove any language from the original article that seemed to lack objectivity. As I am primarily a translator, the first draft was simply a translation of the corresponding page on Spanish Wikipedia, and the "peacock terms" included in that draft were therefore a faithful translation of the original Spanish! I have also added references at certain points in the article. Particularly as this is my first Wikipedia piece, I'd be grateful for any suggestions on specific details that still need modifying.