User talk:Linneyern92/sandbox

Feedback on Draft
Revisions necessary. This is a good start and is almost ready to be moved to the mainspace. Here are the things you need to fix: Chronophoto (talk) 02:55, 22 February 2016 (UTC)
 * Need to expand the prose. Right now the prose is around 250 words, but it needs to be at least 500 words. However, you should go ahead and move your text to mainspace before you add the additional 250 words – you can add them right to the public page.
 * Format the section headings as “Heading” (not “sub-heading 2”).
 * Add more citations throughout. Move footnote 1 from the heading into the text.
 * Make sure film titles are in italics.