User talk:Linzjay/sandbox

Class Review: Overall good article. I think there are a few things that could be improved upon. 1. The introduction to the article could give a little more information about the disease itself and what it causes. Otherwise the reader is thrown into the genetics of the disease without really knowing what autosomal cerebellar ataxia causes. The other option would be to switch signs and symptoms with the genetic side. 2. The first paragraph of signs and symptoms has some English and grammar errors that could use some work. 3. I checked out the first reference you have down- the Orphanet Journal of Rare Diseases. Under its management of the disease section it mentions like you do that there is no cure. It also talks about managing some of the symptoms and what can be done to manage those. I think that would be good to include. LDNeurobio (talk) 04:13, 28 March 2013 (UTC)LDNeurobio