User talk:Lior Nesher/sandbox

1. First, what does the article-draft do well? Is there anything from your review that impressed you? Any turn of phrase that described the subject in a clear way? Yes he's draft is very clear to see it. I impressed this part "The entry is allowed from the age of 18 and the entry prices are NIS 40 on early sale or NIS 70 on the day of the event." because in USA a minimum legal drinking age is 21 but this festival allowed from the age of 18.

2. Are there sections in the article that seem unnecessary? Is anything off-topic? No

3. Does the article focus too much on negative or positive information? Explain. No Remember, neutral doesn't mean "the best positive light" or "the worst, most critical light." It means a clear reflection of various aspects of a topic.

4. Does the article draw conclusions or try to convince the reader to accept one particular point of view?Are most statements in the article connected to a reliable source, such as textbooks and journal articles? Or do they rely on blogs or self-published authors? No

5. Are there any changes you would suggest the author apply to the article? Why? No I think everything looks good

6. Did you notice anything about the article you reviewed that could be applicable to your own article? Let them know! No

7. Write your name followed up by "Kellyyyyy123 (talk) 00:30, 29 October 2019 (UTC)" KellyKellyyyyy123 (talk) 00:30, 29 October 2019 (UTC)