User talk:Lioramatthews/sandbox

Hi Liora

I saw that you're working on different sections of hoarse voice. Brilliant jobs of identifying the gaps! The current article of hoarse voice needs a lots to clean up because the information is not specific to different types of voice disorders (e.g., organic vs functional vs neurological vs iatrogenic etc)

The edits are great as far as I can read in your sandbox. One suggestion -- when you discuss the treatment methods and incorporate the information in the main article, try to specify if the treatment method is specific to which voice disorders.

I look forward to reading the final contribution. Great going!

best nicole