User talk:Lipien

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Notice of edit warring noticeboard discussion
Hello. This message is being sent to inform you that there may be a discussion involving you at Administrators' noticeboard/Edit warring regarding a possible violation of Wikipedia's policy on edit warring. Thank you. Willbb234 (talk) 19:23, 29 May 2019 (UTC)

I am not sure what you find wrong with listing, in an biographical intro, all of the organizations that the individual has helped establish. It is common with living authors to list their key works in an intro. Why is it incorrect or not consistent with how other biographies of living people appear in Wikipedia? Lipien (talk) 11:45 15 June 2019 (EDST)
 * Firstly, there is no evidence to say that he was born in Manchester, only that he was born in ‘Northwest England’.
 * Secondly, the introduction is too long and cluttered, see Mark Parker (CEO of Nike) as a good example. It should only tell key information and not all their life achievements - those can be inlcuded later in the article.
 * Thirdly, what makes the achievements you have listed more important than the other ones listed in the last paragraph of the source? Why was it those few achievements were selected instead of the other ones?
 * Here is a useful extract from WP:Intros: "A good introduction should introduce the topic, telling readers unfamiliar with the topic exactly what it is. Write a line or two about who or what the subject is (State the obvious). A good intro should also contain a concise overview of the article, summarizing the most important points."

I hope that answers your question. Regards, Willbb234 (talk) 12:45, 16 June 2019 (UTC)

Edit Warring
Lipien, please could we try to resolve the situation regarding the edit war on Arnold Thackray, otherwise I will have to take the incident to the Administrators Noticeboard for edit warring. Regards Willbb234 (talk) 19:27, 29 May 2019 (UTC)

Did you not see your edit was reverted?
I will have to get an admin involved if you continue to add information which doesn’t follow WP:MOS. The edits are written in a somewhat promotional tone. Regards, Willbb234 (talk) 07:22, 15 June 2019 (UTC)

July 2019
Please stop your disruptive editing. If you continue to violate Wikipedia's no original research policy by adding your personal analysis or synthesis into articles, as you did at Arnold Thackray, you may be blocked from editing. Willbb234 (talk) 07:26, 2 July 2019 (UTC)