User talk:Liryans/sandbox

Hi! I have read over your Ayni article and it looks great. It is very informative and I appreciate that you use a decent amount of sources and links to other related articles. I really appreciate your related article section because it emphasizes that the idea of mutual help and responsibility extends into cultures other than just the specific indigenous societies that you mention. I was wondering if you plan to continue the article or it you plan to keep it at its current length; because at this moment it seems a little short for a stand alone article, but perhaps you could add your link into other similar articles instead of adding more information. Also your second and third sentences could be rewritten so as to flow a little better, however, information-wise everything looks good and well referenced. Other than those two items, I cant think of any other suggestions I have. Great work. Best, Sheridan.lea (talk) 21:42, 6 April 2015 (UTC)