User talk:LisaFeldmanAndrews

Rudy Feldman
Lisa, welcome to Wikipedia. I saw your recent edits on the Rudy Feldman article, which I created back in 2011. I reverted your edits because the content you added was all lacking citations, had formatting issues, and overloaded the lead of the article. In addition, it looks like you copied and pasted some content in from the 1994 San Diego Chargers season article, much of which doesn't really belong in Feldman article. I then expanded the article with some sources from Google news (https://news.google.com/newspapers) and added some structure with sections in the body of the article. If you want to go back and further expand or reintroduce some of the content you added to the article, please do so. I hope that the structure and tone that I've put into the article thus far will give you an idea about how to better expand it while keeping it in line with Wikipedia standards about formatting and sourcing. My guess from your user name is that you are related to Feldman? If that's the case, I'm sure you have personal knowledge of details about Feldman like the blurb about him walking to walk to Stanford Stadium as a child. Even if you know that to be true, we need to cite everything in the article with reliable sources; see Identifying reliable sources. Let me know if you have any questions or if I can assistant with further editing this article. Thanks, Jweiss11 (talk) 02:56, 5 October 2015 (UTC)