User talk:LisaH91

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Peer Review by Leslie
Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you? Everything was an easy guide to read through. There was a comma after the "or" part which can be deleted. Is the article neutral? Are there any claims, or frames, that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? The article appears to be informative and gave clarification. It seems as though the edit was fixing grammatical errors in the section.

Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? I feel as though it is underrepresented because it did not give a lot of insight of queering the section.

Check the citations. Do the links work? Does the source support the claims in the article? Citations were good. Active and links and does relate back to the topic. Is each fact supported by an appropriate, reliable reference? Where does the information come from? Are these neutral sources? If biased, is that bias noted? Yes. It relates back to different ISBN's provided. The information comes from reliable sources. There are neutral sources and no bias notes.

Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that should be added? The information was edited, therefore, I do recommend more queering — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lptoled2 (talk • contribs) 03:15, 30 November 2018 (UTC)

Hi Leslie, thank you for your peer review. I think that we could have elaborated a bit more on some of the queer aspects of the Kama Sutra -- looking back at it, I noted there were some things that I had forgotten to mention and wanted to add to it. As Sarah and I mentioned in class, someone clearly beat us to the punch! Thanks so much for the feedback.LisaH91 (talk) 01:37, 6 December 2018 (UTC)