User talk:Little Moose

You recently made a number of excisions which you thought improved compliance with WP:NPOV.

Could you please explain more fully how this passage does not comply with WP:NPOV?

Cheers! Geo Swan 15:30, 19 October 2007 (UTC)

It has been a while since I've logged in so I appologize for the greatly delayed response. It seems to me that a lot of that entry has more to do with rendition than it does with Wilkins. As such, those aspects should be included in an article on rendeition but only need a brief reference under the Wilkins article with a link to the rendition article. User:Little Moose