User talk:Littlemountain14/sandbox

Mlan321 PEER REVIEW
I like how you guys started with statistics in regards to the fatality rates of diphtheria and stated the time period in which these rates occurred. One thing to elaborate on is how and the worldwide outbreaks you stated occur. For example other than the lack of vaccination is there other reasons for the outbreak? Is there a reason why the outbreak occurs more in Canada and Germany? For example are certain people more susceptible to the disease. Also explain why the fatality rate is higher in children under 5 and adults over 40 years of age. Overall by including estimates from the Red Cross to support your statistics was a great idea. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ilykdogs (talk • contribs) 18:32, 17 November 2017 (UTC)

Peer Review
A lot of good information and statistics. Need to cite source for the first paragraph to validate information.Mklivelaughlove (talk) 05:19, 17 November 2017 (UTC)