User talk:Liv.spatol/Iceland Sea

HENV 680 - Peer review
Great article draft overall! I would suggest fixing the first sentence (i.e.: "The Iceland Sea, a small body of water, bounded by Iceland is defined by its proximity to the Mid-Atlantic Ridge, which transforms into the Kolbeinsey Ridge, and the Greenland-Scotland Ridge, lies just south of the Arctic Circle.") as it is a very long sentence with a lot of information. I think it would benefit to split it into two sentences. Also, maybe adding some information about the impacts of climate change on this sea would contribute well to this article.

Also, in this sentence in the marine life section ("Regarding marine mammals, eighteen species of cetaceans being whales, dolphins and porpoises are present, as well as seven species of pinnipeds being seals and walruses inhabit the Iceland Sea.") would it sound better like this: "Regarding marine mammals, there are eighteen species of cetaceans present, such as whales, dolphins and porpoises".

Great article overall! Kyra.Pompeo (talk) 15:43, 8 April 2024 (UTC)


 * Thank you for the helpful feedback! I applied the changes you mentioned and will definitely look to see if I can find anything regarding climate change impacts. Liv.spatol (talk) 15:54, 8 April 2024 (UTC)

Peer Review
Really great article! Mainly I noticed the lack of photos and graphs which would improve the general look of your article and may help with understanding. I also think a section on the economy of the surrounding communities would be an interesting addition. Overall, great work! SarahEnviro (talk) 16:02, 8 April 2024 (UTC)

Review
Well written. Just add pictures for better understanding KAPARN1609 (talk) 16:16, 8 April 2024 (UTC)