User talk:Livg21

Welcome!
Hello, Livg21, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Peer Review
Hi Livg21!

First of all, I found your article selection really interesting! I think that you have a great direction going in your edits and planned changes so far, so keep up the good work on that. :) One suggestion I would give you is to avoid referencing studies and the authors of those studies in the article. Instead, be sure to cite them in your work when you are referencing their work. I think that we're supposed to just be putting information we've found into the article, and providing links for readers that want to read into it further. Keep up the great work!

Earthslug (talk) 02:45, 8 November 2021 (UTC)Earthslug