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After reading the article, I think it would be beneficial to add examples of alters that they are wanting to make in honor of black women. I think expansion on who people are in the Black Feminist Future would be helpful. Maybe add another name if possible or just expand on Jessica Byrd. Overall, the article looks good but could use some more facts or supporting evidence. I have not heard of this movement so adding more information to the article would be helpful for people who have no idea what the movement Is about. Language is good and spelling looks correct. Great job!

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I also think if there was more information on the resources that will be provided for the Black Feminist because I think that would help to close the idea and transition the article. Also I understand the history page hold all of the information about the movement but I also think there needs to be an introduction section? Something to help the article flow. Maybe address how the movement started and where it is going in the introduction to help summarize the article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sophiavick (talk • contribs) 14:08, 18 April 2018 (UTC)

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Excellent topic for our future black feminists. I would add the organizations members names to give everyone credit for their part. In the initiatives section I would list some example of racial discrimination. We need women of all colors to run for public office the more the better. Great current sources. Well done and great job!Angelfeathers6 (talk) 14:46, 18 April 2018 (UTC)

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As I read through your editing you have done a great job in neutral information given. I do have a question though where are you getting this information from? Is it all just one website?

RealWorldddddTalk (talk) 17:10, 18 April 2018 (UTC)