User talk:Liwei1995

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Peer Review 113A
Hi Liwei,

It's a very detailed biography. However, for the first part, a picture of the professor can definitly help. Also, it's better to have some sub-divisions for the topics. It seems obvious that his biography is arranged in chronicle order. So some sub bulletin points would help the readers to have a better understanding of the content. Dingyangyao1995 (talk) 00:18, 25 November 2016 (UTC)

Also, i think the "other work" section should be more specified, in terms of his researches. Because a professor's research is pretty important for him and hose who are interested in reading about him, therefore it might be better to list his contribution explicitly. Dingyangyao1995 (talk) 00:20, 25 November 2016 (UTC)