User talk:LizBacon

The Feminine Mystique Peer Review
Hello. It's a shame the cluebot mistook your edits for vandalism! I wonder how much of your work the cluebot deleted. I like that you chose to edit The Feminine Mystique since we learned about that in class. I noticed that in the sentence, "She states 'Anatomy is woman's destiny...'", there was a comma missing after "states." The comma was also missing after "argues" in the sentence, "She argues 'In a sense that goes beyond...'" It's just a minor grammatical mistake, which I actually edited in the article. In the sentence, "Friedan goes onto argue that the problem is a women needing to mature and find their human identity," it should be either "a woman" or "women." Personally, I think "women" sounds better. I noticed that the external link in your citation doesn't work. You can click on it, but it comes up with a 404 error. That's something important you might want to try to fix. -Zoeydodson (talk) 03:44, 9 November 2014 (UTC)

December 2014
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 * The following is the log entry regarding this warning: The Feminine Mystique was changed by LizBacon (u) (t) ANN scored at 0.907429 on 2014-12-09T20:11:01+00:00 . Thank you. ClueBot NG (talk) 20:11, 9 December 2014 (UTC)

English
Sorry, I reverted some of your edits. I couldn't understand what it said. It also had many grammar errors and the source seemed weak. Maybe English is not your first language. Bhny (talk) 20:00, 10 January 2015 (UTC)