User talk:LizCannon25/Ancient Nuclear Warfare

I like the topic of your entry and the way that you have supplemented it with specific examples and bibliographic references. I found the wording of your article to be awkward and repetitious in places. Please remember that this is intended to be a concise encyclopedia entry, in which the emphasis is on specific facts.

Bringing specific scientific evidence to bear on this problem has made for a stronger entry. I think you do a good job of highlighting the problematic interpretations offered by von Daniken and Childress. Hoopes (talk) 18:11, 30 November 2012 (UTC)