User talk:Lizb07/sandbox/february 7 draft edit or article

The following comments relate to this course.

Documentation for popular claim
Where is the source for this claim " southern New Mexico's most popular festival...?" --Joe (talk) 01:16, 9 February 2014 (UTC)

That claim is left over from the original article. It totally escaped my attention. I've searched and have cannot find a solid source fcr this claim so I will remove it. Lizb07 (talk) 16:25, 9 February 2014 (UTC)


 * Ok! Let's see if anyone complains. --Joe (talk) 04:51, 10 February 2014 (UTC)

Definition of several
"...cut into several pieces...." Several means more than a few but not many. Is several the correct word? --Joe (talk) 01:16, 9 February 2014 (UTC)

Would "a multitude of pieces" better fit?Lizb07 (talk) 16:21, 9 February 2014 (UTC)


 * Would "many" do the job? --Joe (talk) 04:51, 10 February 2014 (UTC)


 * Absolutely! Thanks again!Lizb07 (talk) 03:44, 11 February 2014 (UTC)

Addition of Links
Thank you so much for the added links! I really appreciate the help as that is an area I found a little difficult. Lizb07 (talk) 16:32, 9 February 2014 (UTC)


 * You are welcome. --Joe (talk) 04:51, 10 February 2014 (UTC)

Feedback
The information added to the Las Cruces, New Mexico page was really helped to improve the page. One suggestion I can make is to added some more information on what is the fair is, for example include some more of the activities that are done/presented in the show.Trinityo12 (talk) 05:00, 19 February 2014 (UTC)