User talk:Lizmeuser/sandbox

Peer Review
Hi Liz, I think it's very clear that you've been putting a lot of work into your draft and there's some really good stuff that you've written. I feel like you've also done a very good job of coming across as unbiased. The only advice I would have for you is to strive to make your tone more formal and specific. Try to express things as explicitly as possible.Jgomeskuehner (talk) 22:58, 1 March 2018 (UTC)