User talk:Lizz UD/sandbox

Peer Review by Malachy Collins 1. The article is very fleshed out and provides a lot of important details about the character in this Fever series. I was impressed with how much detail she provided about the character and all of the subcategories that she was able to include in this article, especially diving into the storyline and the sword of destiny and sword of Lugh that she mentioned. Also, Lizz has a multitude of references and resources that are effectively scattered throughout the article that really boost it and made it that much more effective and reliable. 2. One change that I would consider making would be to include the name of the author and book series in the lead or opening paragraph. I think this is the most essential information and should be put first before anything else alongside all of the information that is in the lead. This change would be an improvement because, I believe, this is very important information and should be given almost immediately. This would create a more effective lead paragraph. 3. Right off the bat, this article does a lot of things correctly, there are multiple pictures of the book series that Lizz references in the article. I am not sure if this is possible, but it would be nice to see a picture of the actual character in the novel, if there is perhaps a drawing of the character available online. This could be impossible, and no pictures or drawings of this character could exist on the Internet that would be safe to use but I think this would be a great improvement to the article because we get to see the actual character that the article is all about. 4. Our articles could not be more irrelevant since I am talking about a female professor and virologist, while Lizz is talking about a fictional character in the book series. However, it was very interesting to learn about this character and about the series since I have never heard of it before. I think the subject matter is incredibly different, but I think that reviewing this article allowed me to compare what information and formatting I currently have and how I can effectively add to my own article.