User talk:Lizzyczyz/sandbox

1. I like how she added more of a description of what clean eating is, I also liked how she added some examples of how people can eat clean. 2. this section is necessary in the article and everything is on-topic. 3. It focuses equally on the pros and the cons of this dietary life-style. 4. The article explains the pros and cons of this diet. It explains why people choose to partake in it, but it also explains the lack of scientific and professional knowledge about the affects of clean eating. The original article uses more sources that skew someone towards rejecting this lifestyle, so adding the paragraph Lizzy did was good to balance the article out. There is a lack of research on the topic so it is very hard to find academic journals on this topic. the original article sources and the sources Lizzy added are mostly books and articles. 5. Even though there is not a lot of research and information on this term that was born though social media platforms, I would try and look for more sources that give more hard facts about this lifestyle. 6. Lizzy's contribution was very helpful because I am working on this same article too. 7. Isabella HuberIsabellach99 (talk) 15:40, 28 October 2019 (UTC)

Thanks for the feedback! Lizzyczyz (talk) 01:09, 5 November 2019 (UTC) Elizabeth Czyz

I made these changes to the "Clean Eating" article because I felt that it did not describe clean eating in a way that everyone could understand. I felt that the article was very vague. It also provided very little information on orthorexia and what it is as well as how it can be treated.Lizzyczyz (talk) 23:42, 18 November 2019 (UTC)Elizabeth Czyz