User talk:Ljbriner/2012 Michoacán murder of photographers

I really like how you have made sure to fill in each section. It gives it a full effect. For the most part, good content. I would suggest solidifying facts, such as year of birth (I saw there was a question mark by it). Also, I would look at all of the red links because they don't have pages attached to them. Besides that, I think you're off to a great start. Keep going! 74.143.53.74 (talk) 00:43, 25 October 2012 (UTC)