User talk:LkUAB/Post-traumatic stress disorder among athletes/Arionnar3 Peer Review

Here, the article starts by saying that many people mistake PTSD for a normal response to trauma. However, they do not expand on this. I have highlighted where I suggest could use some editing.

There is a common sense of confusion between the difference of PTSD and a normal response to trauma. If an athlete injures himself or herself in a horrific way, it is normal for them to go through some adversity before overcoming the injury.[3] They may develop small flashbacks, have bad dreams, or feel like they can't get the traumatic experience out of their mind.Italic text[2] [1]There are many therapies which can help treat PTSD, including psychotherapy, art therapy or social engagement etc.[3]

A good sentence that could go here is that, PTSD is commonly associated with soldiers returning from war.This would be fair to say considering they give an example of a normal response to trauma but do not describe examples of PTSD.

Brassil, H.E., Salvatore, A.P. The frequency of post-traumatic stress disorder symptoms in athletes with and without sports related concussion. Clin Trans Med 7, 25 (2018). https://doi.org/10.1186/s40169-018-0200-y

Arionnar3 (talk) 20:47, 4 October 2020 (UTC)