User talk:Lkevincastillo/sandbox

Instructor Comments:' Don't write this in the first person. You are summarizing others' research only. You also need to make sure you have at least 5 sources. At least 2 of these sources need to be scholarly. Also, make sure you are not close-paraphrasing, and that you put the information you use into your own words (and that you appropriately cite it). You need to add more here. And lastly, make sure that you use cohesive paragraphs and that each expresses a clear idea using a topic sentence and supporting details, etc. ''