User talk:Llanthony Secunda Manor

Church Farmhouse, Caldicot
I’m afraid that’s not how we write a Wikipedia article. A few points:
 * Citations - we cite the information given in Wikipedia. Your re-write removed all the existing citations, and replaced the original article with a, completely uncited, text. Citations must come from Reliable Sources and are crucial to enable readers to Verify what is written. Nothing you included could be verified.
 * Tone - we don't write articles in our own voice; "We need to go back to the reign of King Henry I to start our story", "I would like them to know how thankful I am for her past ownership", and many other phrases, are examples of the personal tone we don't use.
 * Conflict of interest - your username, Llanthony Secunda Manor, suggest you have a personal connection to the article subject. This will create a Conflict of interest, and you should find the linked advice on this helpful.

I hope the above isn't too discouraging. Wikipedia can be a great place, but we all need to follow some of the basic rules. All the best. KJP1 (talk) 08:48, 6 June 2021 (UTC)