User talk:Llh19/pittsburghcityseminar

Hi all, You can check out the new Garfield Community Farm page that we've started here. It is right now still a stub, of course. Llh19 (talk) 00:51, 8 November 2010 (UTC)

hello --Battlefield1181 (talk) 15:35, 1 November 2010 (UTC)

Helping hand
Hi guys, this is Piotr - the guy who gave the guest presentation on Wikipedia in your class on Monday. If you have any questions, you can ask me on my talk page. See also Help desk and Help. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus 17:37, 1 November 2010 (UTC)

Assignment
As instructed for the 11/3 class, I have created a username( User: Cs2701 ) and joined my group the Hill District Heroes. Our Group will be editing and expanding the Sala Udin stub for our article. For Practice I have edited the Oakwood (Pittsburgh) and the Pittsburgh Blues Festival Wikipedia stubs. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Cs2701 (talk • contribs) 02:13, 3 November 2010 (UTC)

For practice I have edited the Medical social work page. --Mschug (talk) 13:07, 3 November 2010 (UTC)

Thank you, Mschug and Cs2701 Llh19 (talk) 23:45, 7 November 2010 (UTC)Llh19

Request for Example
Hi, does anyone have a link to a good article on Wikipedia about a community? It would be helpful if my group had an example so we can focus our research and create new sections where necessary. Thanks! --Battlefield1181 (talk) 19:57, 8 November 2010 (UTC)
 * Check Good articles/Geography and places and Featured_articles. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus 20:06, 8 November 2010 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much! --Battlefield1181 (talk) 00:25, 9 November 2010 (UTC)

Assignment 11/10
 sdl27 (talk) 21:44, 9 November 2010 (UTC)

 Spector.a (talk) 20:40, 9 November 2010 (UTC)

MorganPaige (talk) 20:32, 9 November 2010 (UTC)

MorganPaige (talk) 17:12, 15 November 2010 (UTC)


 * Thank you, MorganPaige; however please see #3 link below, which is the actual link to the DIFF (shows clearly the difference of your edit) Check out the link address--Llh19 (talk) 00:59, 9 November 2010 (UTC)Llh19

--Mschug (talk) 19:45, 9 November 2010 (UTC)
 * Dear Mschug, we need a few more details about how, exactly, you will expand the Children's Institute stub.--Llh19 (talk) 00:59, 9 November 2010 (UTC)Llh19

Skg30 (talk) Skg30 (talk) 21:47, 9 November 2010 (UTC)



--Cs2701 (talk)-- 18:59, 9 November 2010 (UTC)

--Ans168 (talk)--21:05, 9 November 2010 (UTC)

Battlefield1181 (talk)
 * -- South Side talk page Diff -- Battlefield1181 (talk) 20:44, 9 November 2010 (UTC)
 * -- Southside Flats talk page Diff -- Battlefield1181 (talk) 22:49, 9 November 2010 (UTC)
 * -- Southside Slopes talk page Diff --Battlefield1181 (talk) 22:54, 9 November 2010 (UTC)

Mnp8 (talk) 04:08, 10 November 2010 (UTC)

bk48 (talk) 21:36, 9 November 2010 (UTC)


 * -- Minkoff610 (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 23:24, 9 November 2010 (UTC).

 H.M. Pickle (talk) 03:34, 10 November 2010 (UTC)

 --Cmm179 (talk) 04:33, 10 November 2010 (UTC)

 Cwl18 (talk) Cwl18 (talk) 04:54, 10 November 2010 (UTC)

 Tpm21 (talk) 16:42, 17 November 2010 (UTC)

Revisions
I have posted a diff to the Sala Udin Discussion page where I summarized my revisions to the article. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Cs2701 (talk • contribs) 01:20, 2 December 2010 (UTC)

Editors here to help

 * Hholt01 (talk) 04:14, 17 November 2010 (UTC): Hi all! Kudos to you all for your efforts and always know you can use Pittsburgh Wikiproject as a first stop for assistance.  As always Go Pitt!.

Reviews
I have reviewed Talk:Shadyside_(Pittsburgh), focusing on the Manual of Style issues. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus 19:16, 17 November 2010 (UTC)

Today I have found time for Talk:Children's_Institute_of_Pittsburgh. This article is WP:DYK-eligible, good job! --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus 19:10, 18 November 2010 (UTC)

Added to Talk:South_Side_(Pittsburgh). --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus 16:41, 24 November 2010 (UTC)

And now Talk:Sala Udin. This article is WP:DYK-eligible, good job again! --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus 16:49, 26 November 2010 (UTC)
 * Hi Piotrus, Thanks for giving us feedback. I nominated several of our articles for the DYK section as you suggested, but they were all removed immediately because "too old, not expansion, other problems"--what should we do? Llh19 (talk) 19:21, 29 November 2010 (UTC)Llh19
 * I'd have to see the exact removal diff / comment, but I do believe the the nomination deadlines was missed (IIRC both of your class' eligible articles were expansions, they have to be nominated 5 days after the expansion occurs). In the future, when you become more familiar with how WP:DYK works, this should be easier - it is common for many new editors to miss DYK deadlines. Anyway, I'll ask the editors who decline your noms to explain their rationale to you. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus 20:58, 29 November 2010 (UTC)

I have removed those 4 nominations after they have been reviewed by other editors and myself. Before nominating, please check whether the nominated article
 * meets novelty criteria, i.e. it should be written or 5x expanded by "prose count" within 5 days from nomination.
 * referenced - DYK requires at least one reliable in-line reference to cover each paragraph, except for plots (movie, book) and the lead.
 * contains basic grammar and formatting errors. In particular, use of bare urls in references is not allowed on DYK.

I will explain my abrupt comments upon specific questions. Cheers. Materialscientist (talk) 00:25, 30 November 2010 (UTC)