User talk:Lloan

Your submission at Articles for creation: Fit Body Boot Camp (December 5)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by RileyBugz was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

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RileyBugz 会話投稿記録 20:10, 5 December 2017 (UTC)

Forbes blogs
Please do not continue to add citations to https://www.forbes.com/sites/garrettgunderson/2017/11/15/this-fitness-ceo-is-revolutionizing-the-franchise-industry-just-by-caring-more/2/#50f5a0d36ecd, as you did at Draft:Fit Body Boot Camp. In the "sites" section and written by a contributor instead of by Forbes magazine staff, it is a effectively a self-published blog with no meaningful editorial oversight. As such, it is not a reliable sources for facts. See the archives of previous discussions at WP:RSN. Thank you. --Worldbruce (talk) 19:24, 12 December 2017 (UTC)


 * Thanks for letting me know. Apart from that, is there anything else I should do to the article so that it can be approved?
 * When you get a chance, could you let me know if there is anything else I should do to my article to get it approved? Thanks!

Your submission at Articles for creation: FBBC Wiki (January 8)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Worldbruce was:

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Worldbruce (talk) 17:15, 8 January 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Fit Body Boot Camp (January 11)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SeraphWiki was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Fit Body Boot Camp and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Fit Body Boot Camp, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "db-self" at the top of the draft text and save.
 * If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Fit_Body_Boot_Camp Articles for creation help desk] or on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:SeraphWiki&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Fit_Body_Boot_Camp reviewer's talk page].
 * You can also use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

SeraphWiki (talk) 10:18, 11 January 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Fit Body Boot Camp (January 11)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by KJP1 was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Fit Body Boot Camp and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Fit Body Boot Camp, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "db-self" at the top of the draft text and save.
 * If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Fit_Body_Boot_Camp Articles for creation help desk] or on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:KJP1&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Fit_Body_Boot_Camp reviewer's talk page].
 * You can also use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

KJP1 (talk) 19:55, 11 January 2018 (UTC)

Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Fit Body Boot Camp


A tag has been placed on Draft:Fit Body Boot Camp, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and FAQ/Organizations for more information.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be deleted without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the. SeraphWiki (talk) 21:16, 11 January 2018 (UTC)