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Welcome
From WP:MED. We look forwards to your efforts to improve content on Wikipedia. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 05:04, 2 April 2014 (UTC)

DSM-5?
Hi Lmciszak, http://dsm.psychiatryonline.org//content.aspx?bookid=556&sectionid=41101783 might be worth a look to see what DSM5 is saying about dementia. Emwhitaker (talk) 20:46, 2 April 2014 (UTC)

Hi Fellow UCSF Wikipedian
Hey, I'm one of the students who took the course last time it was offered. Just wanted to offer any support/help I could provide. Feel free to message me on my talk page or it shouldn't be too hard to figure out my UCSF email. Emhawkins (talk) 20:12, 10 April 2014 (UTC)

A few issues
I know this is a lot to take in. Maybe try with some smaller edits. Best Doc James  (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 20:22, 18 April 2014 (UTC)
 * 1) We have a recommended ordering of sections at WP:MEDMOS. Thus changing the ordering of sections is against our guidelines.
 * 2) We do not link terms in our headings
 * 3) We use very few capitals (it is vascular dementia not Vascular Dementia)
 * 4) We typically use the term person rather than patient as we are writing for the general population
 * 5) Please do not create empty headings
 * 6) We are not a how too guide thus a sentence like "Mild Cognitive Impairment versus Normal Aging: How to Tell the Difference?" is not the correct writing style.
 * 7) Additionally we write in prose most of the time rather than with lists.
 * There is still a lot wrong with your additions. We need page numbers for the book you are using. Doc James  (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 21:04, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
 * And the section headings should only have the first word capitalized. Doc James  (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 22:27, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

Removing systematic reviews
Why did you remove two systematic reviews in this edit ? Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 22:32, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
 * But yes Wikipedia does take some time to figure out. Doc James  (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 22:37, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for fixing the caps. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 01:38, 25 April 2014 (UTC)