User talk:Lmerbaum/sandbox

Jonathan Swint peer review
Jcswint (talk) 00:40, 17 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Not sure what "C.R." means, so maybe add some clarification for that
 * Could clarify what "resoled" means in this context. I thought that was to replace the sole on a shoe, maybe a typo?
 * The first two sentences in the already existing article are a bit confusing to read so it could be helpful to take out some of the parentheses to make it flow better. Also needs a citation
 * Overall the additions look good, just need a bit of clarification

Kelsey Runge’s peer review
Make sure you know how to properly cite your sources.

It may be benificial to include some pictures of what you’re talking about

You seem to have a good start going for your article! Kmrunge (talk) 01:33, 18 November 2017 (UTC)