User talk:Lmiller2018/sandbox

Leif,

Overall the edits look good, definitely beneficial to the page. A couple grammatical errors: The apostrophe on Jesus in your first addition isnt showing up, probably a formatting error. Also, I dont thin you need quotes around before in that sentence. Also, on this added sentence, All these are viewed as assaults towards Christ's faith, I would say "on" makes more sense rather than "towards".

Other than these minor things the edits seem to be useful, added in good places, and an overall enhancement of the page.

Nhess8 (talk) 21:51, 20 November 2015 (UTC)