User talk:Lms.sworth/sandbox

(Msyn)

Very detailed: well organized: lots of examples. If I were a student doing a project and/or paper on Catastrophic Interference I would have hit a gold mine landing on your page. Where to begin: organization is key and the way you have the headings and subheadings outlined clearly, is beneficial for navigation on your page. The diagrams are a great addition and will benefit the audience giving them a visual perspective of what the concepts are elaborating on. The only thing I would add into your sandbox is a "Recent Research" section: updated information/sources on this material would be beneficial for people to have access too, or have an idea of some recent research in the area of study if they are constructing their own pages and/or doing a school project. As well if you could add in some researchers that made some major contributions and link to their wikipedia pages (if they have any) that would also be useful as well: I believe people should gain recognition for hard work.

Other than that excellent work and you should definitely make your sandbox public!

You did a good job with the article. the lay out is of the article is good. Adding titles to your mathematical diagrams would be a good idea so that people do not miss what is going on when they are reading the article. I would agree with the comment above that you should include a resent research section. The look up tables hyper link on your article is not working so fixing that would help because as I was reading this I did not understand exactly what a look up table was. This is a really good article and you should put it up online.

Specs92 (talk) 20:28, 3 April 2013 (UTC)