User talk:Logan7733/sandbox

Internet Privacy and Court
This article was clear on the information they were trying to get across; internet privacy and the growing concerns. The source used seemed to be very reliable but may have been biased in the way that they were only focusing on the concerns of internet privacy. I would like to see an elaboration on how exactly these concerns are being brought to the courts. Jheddings3 (talk) 21:05, 31 October 2018 (UTC)

Unclear Subject Matter
Unclear of the distinction between privacy for children through parental controls or Internet privacy as an entity that serves to protect the population from mismanagement of their information. The information has little context and could use more content to contribute better to the topic you are trying to edit. The source goes through properly but the article too closely matches the text from your source, be careful of plagiarism. Maybe more citation and content would better elaborate what you are writing on this topic. Jackelyn Salome (talk) 06:49, 1 November 2018 (UTC)